Tuesday, June 7, 2011

Project 3 in Progress 3

5 comments:

  1. You have definitely don a lot of work on this. I like the fact that the figures are partially covered by the purple blobs, but the perspective is a little off for me. The darker purple blob on the top right versus the other slightly brighter blobs seems to push back but is layered on top of. A little lightening should clear that up though.

    On a side note the tree interaction is interesting and adds a nice dynamic that the one has the other going through it.

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  2. I think what you have so far looks good because its vibrant and there is a lot of flexibility to the background figure I think it gives this pic a lot of fluidity.

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  4. I wonder if the absolute side view is the most effective for this? Should the dude on top be seen from beneath so the viewer also feels weaker than him? I think you can go further with the overlapping shapes to develop space. Consider a gradient moving vertically instead of horizontally to achieve additional depth. I'm not sold on the colors on this one yet. They are a bit heavy so far. I wonder if you could steal a color scheme from some other source or be inspired by a color scheme from some other artist?

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  5. the clay figures fighting are good i like the way you put the color into them also the back ground and foreground clay figures work well

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